A New Collection Review: Interwoven Narratives of Trauma
Twelve-year-old Freya is visiting her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she comes across 14-year-old twins. "Nothing better than being aware of a secret," they tell her, "is having one of your own." In the time that follow, they will rape her, then inter her while living, combination of nervousness and irritation passing across their faces as they finally free her from her improvised coffin.
This might have stood as the jarring centrepiece of a novel, but it's only one of multiple terrible events in The Elements, which collects four novellas – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters navigate historical pain and try to achieve peace in the present moment.
Disputed Context and Thematic Exploration
The book's issuance has been clouded by the inclusion of Earth, the second novella, on the candidate list for a prominent LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other contenders dropped out in protest at the author's debated views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.
Discussion of LGBTQ+ matters is absent from The Elements, although the author explores plenty of major issues. Anti-gay prejudice, the influence of conventional and digital platforms, parental neglect and sexual violence are all examined.
Four Accounts of Trauma
- In Water, a grieving woman named Willow transfers to a isolated Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for horrific crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a footballer on trial as an accessory to rape.
- In Fire, the mature Freya balances vengeance with her work as a medical professional.
- In Air, a parent flies to a burial with his adolescent son, and considers how much to reveal about his family's past.
Trauma is accumulated upon suffering as damaged survivors seem destined to encounter each other again and again for all time
Related Stories
Connections proliferate. We initially encounter Evan as a boy trying to escape the island of Water. His trial's panel contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, partners with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Minor characters from one account resurface in homes, taverns or legal settings in another.
These narrative elements may sound complicated, but the author is skilled at how to drive a narrative – his prior popular Holocaust drama has sold numerous units, and he has been converted into numerous languages. His straightforward prose sparkles with thriller-ish hooks: "after all, a doctor in the burns unit should be wiser than to experiment with fire"; "the first thing I do when I arrive on the island is alter my name".
Personality Portrayal and Storytelling Strength
Characters are sketched in succinct, powerful lines: the caring Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at conflict with her mother. Some scenes ring with sad power or observational humour: a boy is struck by his father after urinating at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour swap insults over cups of weak tea.
The author's talent of bringing you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the return of a character or plot strand from an previous story a authentic frisson, for the first few times at least. Yet the aggregate effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times nearly comic: trauma is accumulated upon trauma, accident on coincidence in a bleak farce in which wounded survivors seem doomed to encounter each other again and again for eternity.
Thematic Complexity and Final Evaluation
If this sounds different from life and resembling uncertainty, that is part of the author's thesis. These hurt people are weighed down by the crimes they have experienced, caught in routines of thought and behavior that stir and spiral and may in turn harm others. The author has spoken about the influence of his individual experiences of abuse and he describes with sympathy the way his characters navigate this dangerous landscape, extending for solutions – solitude, icy sea dips, forgiveness or refreshing honesty – that might let light in.
The book's "fundamental" structure isn't particularly instructive, while the rapid pace means the examination of gender dynamics or online networks is mostly surface-level. But while The Elements is a defective work, it's also a entirely engaging, victim-focused saga: a valued rebuttal to the typical obsession on detectives and criminals. The author illustrates how trauma can affect lives and generations, and how years and care can soften its reverberations.